Section Ⅴ Writing—写一篇故事评论

故事评论包括对书中的故事内容以及主要人物进行简要的介绍。 简单的故事评论在分享书中故事以及观点的同时，适当地加入自己的理解、感受和看法就可以了。

【基本框架】

【增分佳句】

◎第一段：说明要评论的故事

1．I have read a nice story and I’d like to share it with you.我读了一个很好的故事，想把它和你分享一下。

2．Let me introduce an interesting novel.

我来介绍一部有趣的小说。

◎第二段：介绍这个故事的主要内容、主要人物等

1．The story is mainly about a brave young man.

这个故事是关于一个勇敢的年轻人的。

2．It is the poor girl’s love that cures the bad­tempered beast.是那个贫穷女孩的爱治愈了这头坏脾气的野兽。

3．The characters in this story are so considerate that most readers like them.这个故事里的人物是那么善解人意，大多数读者都喜欢他们。

4．The plots of the story are so attractive that I can’t take my eyes off it.这个故事的情节那么吸引人，我真的移不开眼了。

5．In face of danger, they behave so bravely that they move the readers.

面对困难，他们表现得如此勇敢，以至于他们感动了读者。

◎第三段：表达自己对这个故事的感受和评价

1．This is an inspiring story and I have learned a lot from it.这是一个非常鼓舞人的故事，我从中学到很多。

2．I was deeply inspired by the brave young man in this story.

我被故事里勇敢的年轻人深深地激励着。

3．From this story, we have learned that only by working hard can a person succeed.从这个故事中，我们学到的是：只有努力工作才能成功。

【写作要求】

请根据以下要点写一篇英语故事评论。

1．沙克尔顿，英国著名探险家，和船员一起开始伟大的探险。途中被冰山困住了，大家弃船后逃到了大象岛上。而沙克尔顿驾船去寻求帮助。岛上的生活非常艰苦，但是大家凭着坚韧的毅力以及对沙克尔顿的信任活下来了。

2．在这个故事里面船员之间真诚的关心以及沙克尔顿的乐观、坚韧都非常令人感动。

3．从这个故事我们可以学到一个真理：无论遇到任何困难，都不要放弃！

注意：1.词数80左右；

2．可以适当增添细节，以使行文连贯。

【四步成文】

第一步：审题谋篇

第二步：遣词造句

1．伟大的沙克尔顿和船员登上了“坚忍号”轮船。

The great Shackleton and his crew 　went aboard the ship named Endurance　.

2．不幸的是，在途中船被冰困住，掉进了海洋中。

Unfortunately, on the way the ship   became stuck in the ice  , sinking into the ocean.

3．弃船之后，他们逃到了大象岛上。

  After they had abandoned the ship  , they escaped to Elephant Island.

4．尽管遇到很多困难，他们最后还是活了下来。

In the end they were able to survive   in spite of so many difficulties  .

5．我被他们面对困难时的坚忍和坚持激励着。

I’m inspired by   their endurance and perseverance in the face of difficulties  .

6．我从这个激励人的故事中学到了重要的道理。

  I have learned an important lesson from   the inspiring story.

第三步：句式升级

用非谓语动词改写第二步中的句3。

  Having abandoned the ship  , they escaped to Elephant Island.

第四步：连句成篇

One possible version：

Let me introduce an interesting story about a great expedition.

The great Shackleton and his crew went aboard the ship named Endurance.Unfortunately, on the way the ship became stuck in the ice, sinking into the ocean.Having abandoned the ship, they escaped to Elephant Island.Shackleton was so brave that he left them to look for help by himself.In the end they were able to survive in spite of so many difficulties.

I’m deeply moved by the concern and love between them and I’m also inspired by their endurance and perseverance in the face of difficulties.In a word, whatever happens, never give up.

请你根据下面要点提示写一篇关于《黑暗物质》的书评。

1．最伟大的幻想小说之一；由英国作家菲利普·普尔曼创作；

2．1995年出版，已销售1 800万册，翻译成40多种文字；

3．主人公分别是女孩Lyra，男孩Will；

4．你对该书的评价。

注意：1.词数80左右；

2．可以适当增添细节，以使行文连贯。

One possible version：

Dark Materials by the English writer, Philip Pullman, is one of the greatest fantasy novels.Published in 1995, it has sold 18 million copies and has been translated into more than 40 languages.

The heroine is a girl called Lyra and the hero a boy Will.In the first book, Lyra’s father, a scientist, makes it possible that the children enter other worlds, where they have many extraordinary adventures and play an important part in a war that could destroy the universe.

In my opinion, it’s an exciting novel both adults and children will enjoy.